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A Dance to a Silent Song by ~EndlessIllusions:iconEndlessIllusions:



I danced on that marble floor,
and never did I know
that the music had started.

I was blinded through my eyes,
and I followed the tender steps of a stranger.
Never before had I danced,
never before did I think I would.

Yet there we were,
strangers of the soul,
strangers of the heart,
and lovers of the music.

Silence continued its wondrous song
as only sinful footsteps could be heard,
only footsteps that broke a beauty,
and we danced with tears.

I danced silently on that marble floor,
and never did I know
that the music had already started.
©2004-2009 ~EndlessIllusions
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Author's Comments

There is a lot more to this poem than one could expect. You just have to put the pieces together to understand the meaning of it, and I hope you do.

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:iconairmega23:
Wow, this is amazing. You did such a beautiful job of creating the scene vividly, yet still allowed the poem to flow well by not overloading the reader with images. The poem is very open to many different meanigs, probably as many as there are people to read it. However, I will tell you, it struck me.

Greg

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:iconendlessillusions:
From one poet to the other, thank you...I am glad to know you found your own meaning to it. Take care...and really, thank you...
:iconairmega23:
No; thank you for writing such a heavenly piece. You are amazing. I hope you can read my latest piece too, as I just posted it, and am intrested in some feed back from great poets, and you my friend, are a great poet indeed.
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Greg

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:iconendlessillusions:
I just did even before reading this comment :)...
:iconwinglessangelfa:
That's..beautiful. Wow. Just beautiful.
Fav.

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[link] Click on it. Now.
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"If you want me to wait, I will wait for you
If you tell me to stay, I will stay right through
If you don't want to say anything at all,
I'm happy wondering"
:iconendlessillusions:
Oh wow...thank you so very much. I never knew people would enjoy this little piece. :hug: thank you
:iconwinglessangelfa:
It really is beautiful.

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[link] Click on it. Now.
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"If you want me to wait, I will wait for you
If you tell me to stay, I will stay right through
If you don't want to say anything at all,
I'm happy wondering"
:iconwinglessangelfa:
Lol. That was redundant.

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[link] Click on it. Now.
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"If you want me to wait, I will wait for you
If you tell me to stay, I will stay right through
If you don't want to say anything at all,
I'm happy wondering"
:iconendlessillusions:
:) Thank you (now that was redundant as well and we are even)

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